My friend and I's track

[x2pacalypse]

http://www.myspace.com/thexanexperience123

"Death of a G"

im the 2nd part of each verse

this has profanity so probably not a good idea to play it at work...lemme know what you guys think

[teej]

pretty sweet, I'm not too big on old skool rap but it was good from what I know (not much)

I did feel like I was in a highlight reel of MJ or the Hornets though on the 2nd song.

[Slam]

Hey x2, I like it a lot. Lyrics aside, it has a Gorillaz/Whitey Ford feel to it - which I dig. Sounds like you are using 3, maybe 4 layers - which is hard to do and make work. I like your 2nd set when you end with "suicide" and lead to the "suicide" riff.

LOVE the Ferris Buller cut in.

My only comment would be: Don't try and be so gansta. Don't try and jam as many words in. You do that and 60% of your lyrics will be lost on your listening audience.

Good stuff though. I'd listen to it.

[x2pacalypse]

haha thats not our beat its a gravediggaz beat :( sorry to dissapoint

but i didn't really want to go with those lyrics, my friend did (i wrote the lyrics) and it was his recording stuff so i did whatever he wanted haha